Vinzr
1. Ok wordplay and concept but i felt u coulda taken it from another angle
2. Toooo basic
3. Statementish
4. Eh,ok....coulda done better with the dysplace flip..good try though
5. Played out
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Dystopian
1.could be cool in swag and flow match, otherwise i aint feeling it. Plus fast dont even rhyme with stars
2. Basic, simple, non-effective
3. OK hit
4. Another ok hit
5. Not feeling
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Well, props to yall for showing up firstly. Vinz i see u dropped better than this before man, but u far from consistent here and had too many basic stuffs, the nameplay attempts were ok tho, so keep at it. Havent read much from u Dys, u do have some cool concepts but work on rhyming, creativity and stay consistent.
V/dys for having a slightly better verse with less misses
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