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Old 03-13-2014, 07:36 AM   #3
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i dont like the beat, feels like somethings missing to go with that horn? cant quite put my finger on it

i think you've got a good voice, nice pen game but there's a couple spots where you needed to take out a syllable or two from each line to have it flow better, sounded like you were trying to fit a whole bunch in before the high hat hit, nothing major and pretty easily remedied though

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