Aight so.. The dishwashing lines was kinda cool, and then alot of really bad played wordplays..
Santa/presents.. done, changing it to Kris Cringle isnt a flip. Bussin/Bustin.. dont work,
and applause/the clap is real old.
Strik: Forced entries seemed forced to me (lol), rest of the verse tried at least, Dora was a
good attempt, The Indiana wasnt good.
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Its like.. played ideas attempting flips against new ideas needing wording.
Strik gets it for being fresher
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