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Witty · 03-16-2013, 09:13 AM

shouldnt have joined this site, now u'll bleed profusely. This scrub is so shook
its AOB.....& after this u'll need blood donations from one of those groups
lol nice
da heavy hits from my iron fists will make your torso fall flat
don't care who u ermac....i'll beat u worse than that dude in mortal kombat
Cool
nothing you ever post is quotable, so get lost you sordid homo
you never dropped Fire...u only managed to beat him cos he no showed
Not bad
da bazooka'll leave u penetrated with rockets, u're too crippled to win
so i aint talking prayerbooks or songbooks but ive got a Missal n Hymn
Nah
u should join da ultimate writers league & get schooled by vets, u wet back
but forget garbage in garbage out, we'll feed u dope shit & still expect thrash
Simple but not bad

vs

you can't even touch a Piano. and that's nothing new
Ray, if u wasnt blind youd notice no one is listening to you
Man you could have done so much more with this concept
what your trying to do. your always running fucking coward
you should stay quiet, Max, youll never reach that state of power
Nah
don't be friendly and give stuff. consider first the in n outs
taking in count you always giving keys.. wack ppl always in da house
Didn't understand this one
immigrant bitch, stop seekin the american dream & prayin to the lords
i would play UNO with you.. but you'd just steal all the green cards
Lol pretty funny. wording hurt it though
you're no big deal. nigga, you dont even got genitals
i mean you're harsh as a shark & your body parts are all over medicines
I don't know what this means

Rayge takes this one, Mac had a few pretty cool concepts in there and he is definitely getting better all the time, he just needs to work on getting the most out of those concepts and work on his wording. Rayge is gonna be up there challenging at the top, soon enough I would think...he seems to be getting better all the time too, was feeling a lot of his verse this week...just needs to be more clever, less predictable, and I think he'll keep getting better.

Vote - Rayge

03-16-2013, 09:13 AM	#11
Witty Lime Life Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 16,978 Battle Record: 30-41 Accomplishments - Only Slightly Retarded Champed - Lyric Olympics - Summer Classic Rep Power: 85235118	shouldnt have joined this site, now u'll bleed profusely. This scrub is so shook its AOB.....& after this u'll need blood donations from one of those groups lol nice da heavy hits from my iron fists will make your torso fall flat don't care who u ermac....i'll beat u worse than that dude in mortal kombat Cool nothing you ever post is quotable, so get lost you sordid homo you never dropped Fire...u only managed to beat him cos he no showed Not bad da bazooka'll leave u penetrated with rockets, u're too crippled to win so i aint talking prayerbooks or songbooks but ive got a Missal n Hymn Nah u should join da ultimate writers league & get schooled by vets, u wet back but forget garbage in garbage out, we'll feed u dope shit & still expect thrash Simple but not bad vs you can't even touch a Piano. and that's nothing new Ray, if u wasnt blind youd notice no one is listening to you Man you could have done so much more with this concept what your trying to do. your always running fucking coward you should stay quiet, Max, youll never reach that state of power Nah don't be friendly and give stuff. consider first the in n outs taking in count you always giving keys.. wack ppl always in da house Didn't understand this one immigrant bitch, stop seekin the american dream & prayin to the lords i would play UNO with you.. but you'd just steal all the green cards Lol pretty funny. wording hurt it though you're no big deal. nigga, you dont even got genitals i mean you're harsh as a shark & your body parts are all over medicines I don't know what this means Rayge takes this one, Mac had a few pretty cool concepts in there and he is definitely getting better all the time, he just needs to work on getting the most out of those concepts and work on his wording. Rayge is gonna be up there challenging at the top, soon enough I would think...he seems to be getting better all the time too, was feeling a lot of his verse this week...just needs to be more clever, less predictable, and I think he'll keep getting better. Vote - Rayge __________________ He listens to voices inside of his mind Explicit and poisonous violent crime.