sick sick sick battle. two pretty damn insane verses imo.
zygote- an extremely well constructed verse. I thought the flow was top notch. sounded off as a warning of technological advances and where they might be headed. reminded me a bit of Terminator. good stuff. the whole verse was quotable worthy so im not even gonna start pulling stuff out of that verse. my only minor complaint is that it isn't totally accessible to the average reader, your stuff usually is. this got a little too techno babble using a lot of terms and words that most people don't use on a everyday basis. while that gives the verse an extremely intelligent and next level feel to it, it also kinda alienates the reader to a certain degree. very minor complaint. incredible verse.
frank- man another dope verse. your stuff is extremely entertaining. you told a story of a promiscuous guy and this week used the reference of the sea as your back drop. pretty much the same writing method you used with the math concept last week. your good at doing that. the flow was also sick. prolly not quite on the level of zygotes. his was a ten, yours was a nine and a half. you use a level of tongue in cheek humor that is quite clever. I found myself very interested in that verse and wanted to keep reading.
overall- extremely dope battle and very hard one to decide. zygote showed slightly more technical skills here. both took the topic in odd directions tbh. frank entertained with a very technically good verse of his own. liked franks more
vote frank
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