This was cool - the dialogue was the most natural ive seen in a topical. The language in the stanza contrasted in a very cool way yet the conversational aspect was still present in the second, as if the first was too regular fellas and the second was two coked out philosophers excitedly sprinting towards some as-of-yet unknown universal truth. I think the truth we're discussing here is how hubris and pride can make a man play himself for a fool even when it is completely evident that it is damaging to someone who is witnessing it for himself. The 1st stanza supports that and i got those vibes from 'axis information (wordplay!)', copius pride, smelting a road that would lead you correctly for your won 'gold'.. the cancer in our pockets line was pretty clearly a wallet related imagery. take pride in your wallet, and pride is cancerous. and the answering your peers was simply lying to make hyourself look better. and i guess the piece closes by saying goddamnit humanity figure it out and be humble and live a better life. piece was awesomely done, pm me what it was actually about
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