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Old 03-10-2014, 03:50 PM   #16
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Originally Posted by Lars View Post
I'm gonna keep it real though, @Objective we cool but you need to step your vote game up. How you gonna tell me my rhyming is basic?

Do you even multies bro?

I keep a dual scheme running right throughout my verses, it's unquestionably difficult to do and I can see why you wouldn't notice it as you're a polysyllabic rhymer - I can at least appreciate that because it's something I couldn't force myself to do nowadays, but in a match of this magnitude, if you had cost me that match I'd have been pissed. The voters should know what they're voting on IMHO.

You don't get someone who swims in his local baths once a week judging the Olympic diving, feel me?

I kept my mouth shut while the battle was happening, but that def. needs addressing for future tourneys...
Yes, to use the example he gave:

With oxygen, Earth became more tenantable still
but lots of our early ancestors would be killed.

I could see someone complaining about the end rhyme, but that ignores the "oxygen, Earth be-"/"lots of our early" rhyme that is rather difficult, subtle and well-executed.
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