I liked this actually. Don't take this the wrong way, but it came off like you had no end game in sight, and just went with what came to mind, and typed it as it surfaced. I like that though. I also liked how it was unpredictable, and how you were consistent with going off on a tangent. It stopped me getting bored (not that I was). People try too hard sometimes, but this felt like you wasn't. I genuinely enjoyed this, for what it was.
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