Adonis- i was searching for an answer. I dug the piece more after reading a vote to get the vibe of possibly what you were going for. I was a little confused in how the messages you were delivering were mashed up. I wish I had time to reread. All in all, very creative take on the topic.
Diode- i can appreciate the substance in this drop as well as the rhyming devices used. I wasn't too into this but the heart in it was evident. I liked this. Good job.
MVGT to Diode for the easier more enjoyable connection to the subject matter.
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