Netcees - View Single Post - Week 2: Just Write (1-0) vs. El Pancake (1-0) \\ Just Write wins 9-1

Frank · 03-10-2014, 02:15 AM

Just write. Tugging and toying at emotional strings/cords with this one. A real laidback delivery. A natural cadence that undermines the lack of actual technical ability. It takes a genuine writer to pull that style of writing/rhyme off. I thought the progression was pretty much pitch perfect. Probably your new signature piece, along with signature victory. You've elevated a tier with this one imo.

Pancakebrah, decent concept with some decent execution here. A guy who walks out on his life, the irony. Was not fond of this work to be completely honest.

Vote - Just Write

03-10-2014, 02:15 AM	#11
Frank Senior Member Join Date: Oct 2001 Posts: 3,228 Champed - NWL Season 2 - Art of Writing League (5x) - Lime Green Poetry Association - AOWL Season 6 - AOWL Season 10 Rep Power: 3853347	Just write. Tugging and toying at emotional strings/cords with this one. A real laidback delivery. A natural cadence that undermines the lack of actual technical ability. It takes a genuine writer to pull that style of writing/rhyme off. I thought the progression was pretty much pitch perfect. Probably your new signature piece, along with signature victory. You've elevated a tier with this one imo. Pancakebrah, decent concept with some decent execution here. A guy who walks out on his life, the irony. Was not fond of this work to be completely honest. Vote - Just Write __________________ *VETWORK* Last edited by Frank; 03-10-2014 at 02:17 AM.