[Objective]

Adonis - Really liked the set-up to most of your lines, the stanzas are dope with a witty concept. Flowed well, rhymescheme on par throughout. Enjoyed the piece as a whole. Wish I had more to add, but I actually don't. It was a solid showing and I thought the execution was great.

Diode - Dope intro, enjoy how the first verse progresses. Flowed well, I've seen better rhymescheme from you tho', but that's only when I compare this to what I've read from you earlier.

''started reading up on nietzsche but his lessons didn't reach me
so i turned the page to adams and found sarcasm without meaning''
^ Really loved this couplet.

As you continue on your main characters battle to figure out the meaning of life I get drawn into it because I can somewhat relate to ongoing reading about this and that person. I've read a little bit and Nietzsche is definitely an interesting fella.

When I read through your piece I was wondering where you were going with it having the topic in mind. I liked how it ended and understood it as the entire verse is a reply to the quote with your character saying this, and the conclusion/last line is pretty dope and sums it up.

Vote - I feel like this could go either way. I liked Adonis' approach and found it entertaining, Diode came with a great showing as well and I enjoyed his concept a little bit more. It's kinda a coinflip to me. Should I vote for the verse I found the most entertaining to read, or the one with a story and a concept I enjoy more when it comes down to it? As I think about it I'm leaning towards the last one here...

So, due to that my vote goes to Diode. Dope to see you back in action Adonis! Props to both.