Objective, I hope you continue to produce pieces like this because this was one of your better ones you've put together for some time. Outside of the solid rhyming and bit of inagery you sprinkled throughout, I thought you did a pretty good job telling the story. The incorporation of the topic in there was pretty cool, and so was the bit of dialogue thrown in there. While you could have expanded on the story deeper, what you managed to put together did the job. Very impressed. Sacrifice, it's been such a long time since I've read something from you, so it's great you're back at it in this league. You always have one of the better flows when you write and I'm certain it's because you do these in audio form as well. Topic wise, you had some very good lines which set the tone for your piece. The concept was very cool and the sort of hook repeating set a nice pace. I was really drawn in the beginning.
You both did a great job here. While Sacrifice did a very good in what he put together, I felt Objective really impressed me more with a very well written story which reeled me in from the jump. This isn't a knock on Fice, this came down to preference for me.
MVGT: Objective.
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