Plot, a verse usually tends to be a set up line followed by a punch, I didn't see many punches, ur verse was just telling but not enough dissing ur opponent, the point is being creative while belittling ur opponent and u failed to do that, tic tac was more aggressive and has a better grasp of constructing punch lines, that bottom card was dope man
Vote tic tac
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