[Mike Wrecka]

cool battle

fresh - I actually really enjoyed reading the first section of this piece. because it flowed well. and I appreciate that more than most here. but tbh if you ask me what this verse was actually about I couldn't tell you. maybe if I read it again. but I rarely read verses twice, you get one shot to leave an impression on me. your writing is good. you have ability that is apparent. I like the way you structure your rhymes. just in this league, tell a story or a moral of some sort. the voters tend to gravitate towards that here.

pinot - sup. good verse. good flow on a narrative driven story is not easy and you pulled it off well. really liked it. your multis are inventive. they are not straight forward. you come up with some real interesting rhyme combinations. thanks for that. no one else here really writes like that. your less formulaic than most. story wise it was good.


vote - pinot noir