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Old 03-08-2014, 08:42 PM   #13
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and idk man. you've been one of my favorites to read for some time, i have your metaphive archives bookmarked on my browser, but this pretentious 'more authentic than thou' attitude towards everybody and everything is sort of turning me off to your shit. its like you've pigeonholed yourself into this creative funk because you're unimpressed, uninspired and unhappy. i don't really care about you as a person because i don't know you but i do miss reading your more inspired rhyme work. maybe it was "less honest" because you weren't pointing out all the bullshit about the world all the time. but at least it was fun to read. and of course thats selfish to say because I'm commenting purely as a consumer. but I'm also someone who uses this place as a conduit for negative emotions and neuroticism so i vaguely understand why you feel the need to do the same. I'm not telling you to stop writing what you want to write about, ill always take a moment read what you have to say, I'm just giving you an honest opinion. take it how you will.
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