Lol fuckin vivid,
i always enjoy reading your pieces bro. They're either very intricate or very comical, or like this one both. You are probably one of the best story tellers here (concept wise) and it shows here. It was really just a great progressive piece that had just an overall natural feel to it. As i told diode last week i think it hurts you adding a foreign language to a piece that most people can't read, but I believed you pulled it off here.. well at least kept it to a minimun and used spanish words that most people know. I really despise rape or incest pieces though, im just going to be upfront with that. Still a great piece though.
Mike Wrecka!
sup bro? I gotta be honest man I think you pulled off a really great piece here. I mean technical wise and flow wise your pieces are always on point but this was a great emotional story as well. I felt you captured the emotions of someone who did something in their past and is now in utter turmoil over it very very well. The last half to ending was juat stellar. Definitely my favorite piece ive read from you since the T-rex piece, well that i can recollect. Anyways yea man good job
I love this league because it combines all these great writers with different styles and for the most part any writer can beat any writer on any given day. This battle could easily go either way but for me I think mike's piece was just too solid this week. Thanks guys
Mvgt=Mike wrecka
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