Very interesting piece. I was actually kinda thrown off at how the rhyming wasn't as present as I remember reading from you in the past. I think this piece requires a few rereads so I won't say too much, but overall this tone reminds me of written agenda i get lost in too often when free-writing. I'm an activist of several sorts with loose thoughts conflicting each other and some of that is this.
All in all, cool read. glad to still see you in OM.
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