You guys are just a bunch of stupid haters….Destro I just did u a favor
And complained about the voters now, so you don’t have to do it later
Lol, think you could have did more with this, tho
You need a tutor when you write? maybe I could getcha some help
But you need more aids then the ones attached to Strikta’s blood cells
H I V, dude. If he did have AIDS, I'd say this was a pretty decent concept.
Couldn’t finish the NBL , your only mention in the mag…was that
You’ve been in and out of it so much your wife wishes it was her vag
This was funny, to me. Basic but funny. I liked it.
vs
i'm on the come up, pretty soon you'll be watching me sellout
meanwhile your stock be continually dropping like strikta's T-cell count
You hate simile's but used one here. Lol, smh. Decent thou.
des is a demon with hits, when I start to write, I go nuts
bout to leave Bender iced wit six holes in em like hush's box of donuts
I liked this. And what do you know, ANOTHER simile, lol. Co'monnnn.
you feel that pounding in your head while you try to retort?
that's not your heartbeat.. it's a knock on the door looking for back child support
Lol, I think this could have been executed a lot better, but still cool. Considering I just read in some thread he was just divorced an shit.
u been gone for too long, now ur wack & no one cares faggot
take advice from strik: life is precious.. especially when ur girl looks just like that bitch
Lol, played but still gave me a chuckle.
Overall. I got Des taking this. I think Bender's 1st half of his verse was weird and not effective. Like the comparing his record to his height. Being 5'10 really isn't an insult, tbh. So that was a complete miss. The crying about votes, was alright, I think you could have gotten a little more witty with it, just came off kind of blahhh'ish to me. Bars quoted are the bars I enjoyed or had potential to land effectively but fell short. With that being said, I got Des taking this barely.
v/Des
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