Never got bored reading this, despite the length - and it's not easy to hold my attention. The opening bar flowed so smoothly. Great imagery and superb use of vocab.
Loved the bathe in correction/brazen aggression bar. That was fire!! Your word usage was impressive and not once did it feel forced. It all rolled off the tongue with ease, and that made it all the more enjoyable to read. This is one I'll give a few views to. Good shit dude.
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