[big baby]

I thought this was good. Definitely not the best thing you've ever written. But it seemed a bit uninspired. I think you need to flush out a few topics where you arent fully comfortable, as is evident in here. The reason I say you do this is because, you'll feel a bit of discomfort. Which is also the best. You don't want to feel like youve got shit on lock when you're in your own house. Rob someone elses house and have their shit on lock too. Have your entire city block on lock. Not just your own home. Then take over counties. States, and regions. Then countries. Your own home is where you create the best. Leave, because although you may own it, it becomes boring. Not saying this is boring, cause I enjoyed it. But you may become bored.