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Old 03-05-2014, 08:20 AM   #3
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For some reason when I read this I kept thinking of Action Bronson's verse in NaNa. Specifically the first few lines. Idk why. Either way this verse was strange, but the flow especially on the masaii lines was very good. Not much else to say but I liked it.
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