shouldnt have joined this site, now u'll bleed profusely. This scrub is so shook
its AOB.....& after this u'll need blood donations from one of those groups
liked the idea
da heavy hits from my iron fists will make your torso fall flat
don't care who u ermac....i'll beat u worse than that dude in mortal kombat
solid
nothing you ever post is quotable, so get lost you sordid homo
you never dropped Fire...u only managed to beat him cos he no showed
okay
da bazooka'll leave u penetrated with rockets, u're too crippled to win
so i aint talking prayerbooks or songbooks but ive got a Missal n Hymn
slick wp
u should join da ultimate writers league & get schooled by vets, u wet back
but forget garbage in garbage out, we'll feed u dope shit & still expect thrash
wasnt feeling too much
you can't even touch a Piano. and that's nothing new
Ray, if u wasnt blind youd notice no one is listening to you
I like where the nameflip came from, but the excecution wasn't all it could be
what your trying to do. your always running fucking coward
you should stay quiet, Max, youll never reach that state of power
This was a little predictable, but alright
don't be friendly and give stuff. consider first the in n outs
taking in count you always giving keys.. wack ppl always in da house
Great ammo, but again excecution was eh
immigrant bitch, stop seekin the american dream & prayin to the lords
i would play UNO with you.. but you'd just steal all the green cards
lold
you're no big deal. nigga, you dont even got genitals
i mean you're harsh as a shark & your body parts are all over medicines
eh
Alright, Rayge took this pretty easily, but Mac's headed in the right direction. Keep at it, you're forming really good ideas now you just need to take that next step of execution and wording. I can elaborate more if need be but my vote's to rayge for a more consistent verse and better hits.
V/ Rayge
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