Sacrifice- Very nice piece. I fell into this read and enjoyed it thoroughly. I think the stance noted is a great argument, and with this execution it evolved into an exceptional drop. One or two rhyming slips, but this was overall a pretty solid drop. Good job.
Frank- very fucking fine writing. Your realm of descriptive ability is boundless, it seems. You write well when you need to and here you outdid yourself. This was an awesome piece. Great job.
Both you guys had great material. Frank had the perfect balance of everything though. He really brought his niche 'home'. MVGT Frank.
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