sacrafice- i enjoyed reading your verse but i felt as if i was reading a topical sometimes and a short story another. i got lost somewhere along the line just trying to figure out how to read this. despite that disconnection, it was well written. i appreciate your use of words as well.
frank- crazy imagery, i felt like i was there! i am not the greatest baseball fan but this was much too live! your energy in this piece alone stands out for me. i enjoyed reading this and i felt you brought your piece to life
mvgt frank
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