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Found it interesting that both of you chose a similar format to your pieces

neutral-
I liked the beginning, and was intrigued by your snake charmer concept. You kept the theme going throughout your piece with your word choice, and the imagery kept me immersed into your story. Your tie-in to the topic, though, felt a bit weak..

diode-
I couldn't understand what the hell some of the lines meant, so i had to whip out google translate, which isn't always the most accurate.. at least i tried though. The storytelling was cool, but like the previous verse, I wished the tie-in to the topic was more solid/unique.. I liked that you told parts of the Breaking Bad story from a perspective we didn't particularly see in the TV shows, but alot of it was still riding off the story the TV series already told.

This ones hard to vote on.. Both had good aspects and aspects I thought needed work, and I wasn't particularly impressed with either writers take on the topic..

Vote- Neutral. His was more creative in his approach, and that's the tie-breaker for me in this one