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Old 03-02-2014, 11:01 PM   #13
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on my phone, so apologies for the brevity. WZA's verse was cool, a good take on the word blindness, if not a bit predictable. Kinda how the verse played out after, nothing terribly original, but the stuff that was there was good. Clockwerk had a more original idea to it, which I enjoyed, though the writing was pretty flimsy with the rhymes/rhythm/diction. Overall I think Clock took it with a more unique concept.
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