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Old 03-02-2014, 10:39 PM   #11
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crazy battle lol WZA I felt you had the more original approach and kinda made me feel like "great another conspiracy theory" but you had nice good content and pulled it off. I like thinking outside the box but the explanations made it feel amateurish like tellin a joke and asking if somebody gets it ya feel me?
Clock you had a more creative verse and a smooth flow and format. I felt some of the things were confusing like the queen and white knight, not bad, just could have had a more up to date metaphor with a more up to date story.
overall though I gotta vote for Clockwerk for the more polished verse.
good shit guys close call
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