sorry for a short vote guys my daughters been keepin me busy lol
Sacrifice you had a decent verse man, the flow had some complexity to it that I didn't like in the first few lines but picked up and read smooth for me the rest of the way. the take on the topic was a bit cliché because its been done before but you brought a bit of originality to it still so good job doing that on a such a bland topic. props bruh
Frank you had a cool verse too, I love baseball so I had to keep readin an towards the end I was thinkin "don't swing bitch bunt!" lol flow was good but not the best I've seen from you but the story itself was intriguing and kept me wanting to know what happened next. nice choice on Americas favorite past time lol
Vote Frank for the more entertaining drop
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