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Old 03-02-2014, 04:26 PM   #10
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wow I was really impressed by both verses. first thing I ever read from either of you but you guys have some skill most definitely.

wza - loved the first line for some odd reason, it just sounds cool. the verse was very strong. overview of how the people of the world are blind to the truth and just believe what we are force fed by governments and corporations. used a lot of cool analogies to get the point across like

knowledge is power,yet we only scratch the surface,
it's fact that man is a servant for galactic serpents,
though,we will never know our planet's exact purpose,
we are being watched,just ant's in a scope,
curiously tried and studied with trial-use antidotes

really liked that section

good shit man. good concept on the topic too


Clock - went story mode. it was well done. flow was smooth which isn't easy in story mode. it was engaging and kept me interested. one thing stands out was your end rhymes were very well chosen. you know what your doing. it was dope tbh. I like how you started with him blind, then went to flash back mode telling us how it happened. then went back to present day with the detective asking him a question. bravo bro

overall - I really enjoyed both verses. ridiculously hard to pick which one I liked more. but right now at this very moment I ever so slightly liked WZAs more. so he gets my vote here. stick around guys and welcome to the league. im looking forward to your next drops


vote - wza
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