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Old 03-02-2014, 01:31 PM   #11
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Vote - YDK

Close bout. Ink was descriptively interesting, though his mechanics left much to be desired. Verse started off interestingly enough, but would fade into obscurity. It's not easy to maintain a consistent tone of quality through an entire verse, is it? You should take full advantage of the 48 line limit because your time off writing books is better suited for a fuller canvas - where you can tell stories at a pace you're more familiar with. YDK verse was refined and swift enough to hold up against a more discombobulated verse. His steady improvement has been noticed and awarded with this vote.
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