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i'm having a tough time associating your rhyme with the theme of idiot. perhaps i am one, and you must forgive me. i did enjoy this 'write up' - it had a good grasp of wording and showed hints of higher vocabulary level. i just can't wrap my head around how it relates to the topic and ultimately, that's what this is all about. if the topic was 'the snake', you'd be a shoe in though.
diode
for the average reader, this read would make them FEEL like an idiot. and for that angle alone, I award you victory.
metanfetaminas en los estados? a pair of junkie aficiondos?
don eladio is listening though, perhaps gauging their bravado
now he points at un hermano, by the name of Maximeno
and we laugh as his head becomes avocado with my .45 caliber acero
^gangsta
vote - diode
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