[Objective]

Neutral: Love the first two lines. As you go on I'm kind of questioning what is going on, but I'll take it for what it is. It sounds great and I think I got an understanding of your main character here but at the same time I still kinda wonder what hinduism got to do with it all and why he's the idiot. Perhaps I'm the idiot?

When I read the last verse things get abit clearer tho'. And as it goes on I understand why he's the idiot and its connection to the topic, afterall we're all idiots if we should understand his enlightment on the issue. Or I'm I interpreting this in the wrong way?

Either way I enjoyed the execution quite a bit. Well done.

Diode: Enjoyed the first verse, looking forward to where you'll take this. After reading through the second verse I got add that I enjoy how you use the spanish language to make the piece more atmospheric, it makes the whole thing seem more realistic. Also like that you add locations to tie the story together. The rhymescheme is on point as well.

The last two verses equally great and I felt you completed the task pretty well. I don't know spanish that well but I could still make out what you were saying either way, and I thought it was pretty dope.

The ending lines was cool as well.

Vote: I feel like this battle is kinda close tbh. Neutral took a pretty cool and creative approach which I felt Diode equally measured in how he executed his story with the locations and blending in spanish to wrap it up. I really feel like I want to vote for Neutral, but Diode's execution of the verse as a whole was pretty cool.

After going a bit back'n'forth with myself and reading both verses again my vote is ending up in favor of Diode.

Enjoyed the battle, and hope to see more like this in the AOWL. Keep it up.