[Cereal_Killa]

VULGAR:

Here straight out the gate, usually with your pieces there is an overdose of your arena, area and environment (which is magnificent) This time due to the climax it is very fitting that it wasn’t as such.. It was smooth, subtle as if your whole verse resembled the suit that was wrapped around your solider (whilst still holding the political anguish/angles)

“Army administration agencies bugged trainee's brains with neurological sensors”

Straight into the dream stasis

“The cold steel of the synaptic-marine-diaphragm did nothing to curb his chattering teeth”

Through the actual mind map – VISUALLY

“The galaxy raffle was deep”

LOL

“revealed a plastic physique”
(they even mechanized his urinal tract)

cybernetic matrix
+
luminescent ortho's

A Cyber enlightenment.. Massive Woah

The fact that the poor schmoo is stuck in the abyss, the dark matter, in a silent stasis of oblivion to float around as a lost soul is INCREDIBLE

Highly impressed, my friend..


KING RA:

The creepy yet potent intro mix was insane, loved it..

"every hopeless pursuit
to seek & find the truth, which I constantly consume."

Opening stanza
The scurried thoughts, almost distorted
You def can feel the fight/feel the blur
And then..
Perfect alignment on the “wake up call”

Through out the verse as the story, environment unfolds.. each line hits down..
Ima just say your dot points, after every line are f’n sexy (like) ! ! ! !
Whilst still moving through..

Where the serial killer pops with his riddle at the end.. The mixture and the lay up for a DR jeckle and MR hide/Frankenstine future revelation.. was pretty friggen nice..

I loved, cheers :)


VOTE = Vulgar

His brutal world has more avenues/tangents, still loven the play on for your progressive tale Mr King Ra Ra..

Good Luck boys..