[Adonis]

Fice: so thought this verse was pretty good although not that great. To me it was about music or rather the state of hiphop. It felt as if you kept bringing up how music today is all for the monitary and not about the message. But then the end you started taking about Grey's and humanity, which didn't follow my thought of concept so it threw me off a bit. I also wasn't the biggest fan of the rhyme scheme. Some multies were dope,but you often had stretched lines as well as a end rhyme followed by the same end rhyme in the middle of next sentences which didn't love. Solid verse though bruhv.

Frank: I enjoyed the cadence and flow and progression for most part.but in the beginning you jumped from hitting a deep homer to your mom and then bang, you're sliding at second base and safe. Wtf? Other then that the progression was true and moved at a decent rate with no other complaints other then the some what easy choice of end rhymes.good imagery too.

This was a close battle. Frank had the overall better written verse although he played it extremely safe, how ever if I read fice's verse before hand I might of done the same. The mishap on progressions I mentioned really hurt frank because progression is utmost importance in a linear story. How ever....


Vote frank for a more enjoyable read