YDK- as el pancake said I feel the verse is a bit generic. Though I do love the verse and the complexity of the rhyme schemes. I just feel like Inks verse was a lot better on the story telling aspect.
Ink- this verse was very impressive, the way you went at the topic was dope. Your use of literary devices was awesome in my opinion. Though the verse would've been a lot smoother if you would have had multis and internals.
Overall: IMO this is a close battle. Both were good in different aspects. YDK had the good rhyme schemes and story telling though the imagery wasn't there like it was in inks. And Ink had the amazing story telling and dope imagery but the flow wasn't amazing and neither was the rhyming.
I think I'm gonna have to go with ink on this one. His verse just drew me in more with the imagery and story telling. But good shit both of you.
V/Ink
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