[PancakeBrah]

zyg -

"You could have monetized the stages of life as separate add-on expansions,
With a DLC to release different emotions through several micro transactions."

There were a couple of lines like that throughout but that was the best, to me. We all know your rep as a detached persona and I really think that's what you want. In some other writer's hands this would be a religious piece, picking a side either way. But the way you wrote, God and Religion are just the vehicles to your point. It's more of a social commentary than a religious one. At least that's how I read it. Maybe your persona lends a reader to infuse his/her own tendencies due to your anonymity but I don't think that's the case. You're a sharp dude with borderline autistic writing sensibilities and they showed out in the best possible way here. Half satire, half intellectual flex, fully impressed.

Exoduzt -

So basically there's a struggle, the topic comes into play, and everything's okay. Nothing stood out to me. Not trying to be a dick but this seemed very basic and 'rhyme/rhyme/topic/" to me. The formatting didn't help my opinion, with the ellipses and all that. Very surface level and short effort.

v/ Zyg