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Dove Dozer · 03-14-2013, 03:33 PM

lacking a whole lot of complexity which is why you're probably not getting any feed on this. try adding some mechanics to this piece beyond the elemetary writing style.

my 2 c

03-14-2013, 03:33 PM	#2
Dove Dozer loose leaf bruce lee Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,077 Battle Record: 7-6 Rep Power: 1853216	lacking a whole lot of complexity which is why you're probably not getting any feed on this. try adding some mechanics to this piece beyond the elemetary writing style. my 2 c __________________