You don't stand above the beat well enough on this. Raising your vocals would be a big help, but I'm not sure you have enough vocal presence to make a beat like this work. The beat is really good. Your rap is pretty good, though a few of the punchlines were not great. You mixed up your flow well. It just doesn't all come together as well as it could.
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I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.
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