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Old 02-27-2014, 02:19 PM   #5
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I actually thought this was a good battle, flo you surprised me. I was really digging you style in the beggining, first four lines were great. I just got a little predictable and boring for me. I always am looking for that x-factor in a verse to make it stand out and i just wasnt feelin it here, still a decent verse though.

Certain, wtf was this bro lol. I enjoyed it either way. Technical wise this was flawless, and i enjoyed the story through-out. I just wish you would have made it longer.


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