Read through it, didn't really like it but with the pointers you get and your attitude towards improving I don't see why you wont write something that I'll enjoy. Keep it up, have fun and do you.
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I'm not a slave for entertainment, I'm entertainments personal slave,
So deep into writing I'm concerned bout the text on my grave.
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