Sharp
His days are numbered, we wont have this cat stick
I mean, we could all see Flo's ass way before he uploaded that pic
[Smooth, nothing to major]
You lost to CB in UW? I'm bout to wreck him - my gall's known
But you had such a hard time with Camp I was thought you needed to call home
[Funny nice personals goin on]
his best is still shit, fact is this a known fake
Even if flomax out, he wouldnt come close to reaching that pro state
[Clever, and worded to make it read smoothly]
vs
Flo Real
Your lines so overused they on every Site - this bitch *is a tart
right click n view source an you'll see thousands of lines - yup you will see sharp(c#)
[Could've been worded way better, still clever mate]
Your flows ridiculous, the stupid bitch! e doesnt have a clue!
only time youll be mentioned next to flow- is after flo gets a w when this battles through
[Better cool hit, pretty smooth]
when you 'c(see) sharp nine' you think hes somethin 'major'
but you 'c(see) sharp' prefers the 'minor' and ironically its minors that he endangers*
[feel like ur cramming/ trying a lil too hard to make it work flow is off]
Sharp knows I 'preciated his feedback,wasn't a lie *it was a subtle surprise
suppose its true when they say 'The worst men often give the best of advice'
[Cool, could've been worded better but i see the angle ur taking u do have nice concepts just ur wording is what holds them back from bein as lethal as they should've been]
MVG2 - Sharp nine..he had better wording & more lands for me used his personals well to craft his punch
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