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Old 02-26-2014, 04:21 PM   #13
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NOX simply can't fuck with this, his skills include sucking dick
D, is dropping bombs..making NO-XPlode like BSN Supplements!*

not of fan of you abbreviation nOX as no just to make this work

I punch and rip a rookie, so you better start protecting your throat
Cuz you could be an NFL receiver and still not be a threat when you post!

okayish, I've seen similar lines

Teaching him a lesson in blows, leaving him broke in defeat
His preference is a foreign style so he'll probably end up voting for me!*

you worded this in a way that you're rely on having an expo in order for this to make sense. You should've at least alluded to the fact that he's into foreign cars in your set-up

He'll be smoked and deceased, nOX is taking abuse cuz I'm gunning
Cuz you couldn't be Ab-Nautious if he puked on my stomach

not really feeling this

Your bars can't stand my weight, you better invite some help
Cuz I'll leave Nox criticized for taking an L like Michael Phelps!

I've seen a lot of L/weed lines in my life, also this happened a long time ago. Eh



I'm crushing fags, and with a style like yours? It sucks, a fact,
Cuz this pussy's Korea's shot... And hopefully the burn'll kill'em from the clap.

Not feeling it

Your written's are sloppy, you shady fuck, the kid is just dodgy,
I'm reigning fist in the forecast... You'll just need one on every limb on your body.

Okay, i think the wording could've been more effective

Kid you suck with the pen, A geek at heart & has nothing with in,
So even if oppurtunity nOx... He'd open a door just to get sucker punched in the chin.'

dont like the wording of this or the self nameplay

My flows'll just stomp those who oppose nOx, you'll get dropped bro,
Cuz if there's N E talent in D' Lines... TOM BRADY would've never lost to the Broncos.

Concept's cool...a bit too textish for my likings, but it gets creativity points

And I know you're gay, quit the faggotry... kid I'm not just hatin,
But if bitches are fucking D... It's probably 12 inches long, pink and battery operated.

Not really feeling this. If the only D women fucked were vibrators then the human species would cease to exist


MVGT - Nox for better wording and concepts
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