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Originally Posted by Aesthetic
@ Mike rips Mics
I like the reality but in actuality the entire piece was a casualty.
Welcome to netcees.
Try putting 10 minutes into each line; felt like you rushed through this shit.
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Hey man thanks a lot for breaking it down for me, ive always told myself I was kind of all over the place with my rhyme schemes and the way I delivered every line, but im learning day by day bruh , bare with me good constructive criticism ,