Bags - your verse had a nice personal feel, I felt like you were really getting at Allen. You were advanced with your bars, that opening bar counter acting a potential personal is nice because it didn't come across as a waste bar so good job on that. The ghost writer/old as a ghost bar was nice as well, sounds like you wrote some bars for this guy before? I don't know the personal background with you two so I'm just guessing. Either way, you were more aggressive and personal than your opponent was..so good job on that
Destroyer - you were far to generic with your bars, for example that "you'll need a doctor more than you'll need gillet and barbasol". I'm sorry but that's just a wasted attempt at humour, you've got to go head on to your opponent and attack them with personal references or witty humour. I seen that you tried to use some bags wordplay but it didn't really bring enough heat to best your opponent
Vote : Bags
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