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Old 02-25-2014, 04:52 AM   #10
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Massive respect, my friend..

Crazy lines, structure is tight and with this piece the broke rhythm "more than works"


Giving hugs like stokes to a furnace.
But really praying that her life isn't worthless.


That was my fav line.. dude off the chain

here you capture the retrieval of more than just courage..

Thank you for that piece
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