Lotto Smirk - i didn't think you brought creative enough ideas to go the nameplay route. Also, how can you write a full verse without mentioning your opponents name? It takes away from the personal feel, I did see the mod jab but you didn't really turn it into a hard hitting punch. Overall I think you could of brought some better thought out material but you show potential
Kwality - at least attempted wordplay in almost every bar. At least you incorporated his name into your plays to give it somewhat of a personal feel, I didn't think your material was outstanding but you did consistently jab at smirk..
So for that vote Kwal
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