This was an alright battle, first thing i've read from either of you.
WZA, I really liked where you went with this, content was it was great, talking about how we're a blind society and an ignorant species which for the most part is true, flow wise this wasn't the best. Pretty choppy but i still liked the verse
Clockwerk, yours was the complete opposite, flow was buttery smooth but i didnt feel your content, i mean clutching a bible in one line and then in the next talking about queens and wgite knights and a detective at the end? Idk man, got your time frames mixed up bro. Also the whole need to seat next to his queen part was a horrible way to word it just to add an extra multi
Hopefully you both bring more next week
mvgt=WZA
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