I actually posted this in the wrong thread.
Excellent mag, @
Certain. Yet again, I'm left speechless by your analytical skills. You did make a few typos and little mistakes here and there, however.
Since you asked;
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His style isn't so much unique as it is an almalgam of many other greater writers' styles.
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*Amalgam - you added an extra 'l' before the first 'm'.
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He also doesn't not have an elite grip on mechanics, so he will be outrhymed.
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Does not or doesn't. The extra 'not' (with it's contracted form) need not apply.
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And he has a bad trolling habit that sometimes gets in the way of his other pusuits here.
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*Pursuits - forgot the 'r' after the first 'u'.
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Those subte allusions can get to the point where they are indecipherable for readers, alienating his voters.
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*Subtle - forgot the 'l' after the 't'.
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Also, he needs to stop over-formating his text.
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*Formatting - forgot to add the extra 't'.
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His grip on combining rhyme schemes and orginal and interesting diction is hard to come across, and he is a true title contender as a result.
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*Original - forgot the 'i' after 'r'.
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He loses battles because of unapproachbility every once in a while, even as good as he has become at dealing with that issue.
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*Unapproachability - forgot the 'a' after the 'h'.
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He's sloppy, though, and oats is better than him at pretty much ever aspect of this discipline.
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*Every
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Verb's best bet would be to play it tigher and go for the error-free approach.
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*Tighter(?) - forgot the 't' after the 'h'.
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Lets keep it moving forward.
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Should be the contracted form of
let us;
let's. Nothing is being permitted.
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Of course, I don’t speak spanish, so to me it’s just one emotionally heavy conversation followed by another in different rooms.
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The 's' in Spanish should be capitalized.
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He's one of my favorites for his straightahead style, possessing a firm grasp of mechanics and a narrative style that makes his stories easy to read.
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We both know you forgot to add the dash.