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Old 02-21-2014, 08:23 PM   #10
Rawn MD
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for what this was it was enjoyable

nothing groundbreaking, but still a nice lil read

got the feeling ur blazed n just wanted to write something so u did

i liked the throwback type of style u used fast fade/faded, stump/stumped - u coulda done more with that lil steeze n it woulda been dope, but still i like how u ran with the train of thought - kinda tied into the tree hugger/grass blade - but then stepped up the skill a lil bit

n wordchoice was pretty cool too, elaborating on ^^ that, and then with a lil aliteration thrown in puchase/purpose

scheming was pretty dope with internals to externals

ive seen ALOT better from u, but this was still a fun quick read
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