Use fake personals all u want, my real ones'll cause stomachs to turn
I bet its easy being ur brother's keeper when uve got yours in an urn
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in shadow boxing every concept was played, i didnt see this lame go hard
not a single line was original, but there used to puttin karaokes name over bars
u excelled when competition died, shots'll miss his heart n hit his pride
when i give kar ten, itll only take one of them to put the rest of this bitch inside
mad cuz ur skin is white, you're a whigger n no one doubts it son
we all know if you stood up for the black man, its cuz ur pulling a chair out for one
Both had decent verses overall but I am giving my vote to God of War for the above quoted lines. Pulling a chair out for one made me laugh and I liked the name over bars and carton concepts.
Kar that quoted line was dope and if the rest of your verse were like it I think you would have cleaned up here.
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